Dienstag, 10. Februar 2015

Eve

4 Kommentare:

  1. stern: she is very clear when she speaks
    stern: she told me all about her family
    wunsch: you could have mentioned she was from the vampire diaries
    von Katie

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  2. Von Sophie
    Sterne: connectives
    Sterne: Verbs
    Wunsch: add more information about what she is like

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  3. Stern:Good description
    Stern: Correct pronouns
    Wunsch:Need to add connectives
    Von:amina

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