*:Good adverbs*: Good spellingW:not many adjectivesvon : Louisa
stern: you have included everything you need to describe your character stern: it's very clear with the punctuation in the wright placewunsch: use more describing words like very long Grace :)
*:Good adverbs
AntwortenLöschen*: Good spelling
W:not many adjectives
von : Louisa
stern: you have included everything you need to describe your character
AntwortenLöschenstern: it's very clear with the punctuation in the wright place
wunsch: use more describing words like very long
Grace :)