Dienstag, 10. Februar 2015

Orla

3 Kommentare:

  1. *good use of adjectives
    *pronouns are all correct
    ! your past tense was very short and could have been described better

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  2. stern: good use of connectives
    stern: pronouns are good
    wunsch: describe her better


    kaylee

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