Stern:A range of adjectives(description)Stern: Correct pronouns(Er/sie)Wunsch:More variety of verbs
stern: good adjectivesstern: pronouns are rightwunsch: you could have used more connectivesvon Eve(ps: Where is her beard?????)
stern-good use of adjectivesstern-correct pronouns wunsch-use more adverbs ebtihal
Stern:A range of adjectives(description)
AntwortenLöschenStern: Correct pronouns(Er/sie)
Wunsch:More variety of verbs
stern: good adjectives
AntwortenLöschenstern: pronouns are right
wunsch: you could have used more connectives
von Eve
(ps: Where is her beard?????)
stern-good use of adjectives
AntwortenLöschenstern-correct pronouns
wunsch-use more adverbs
ebtihal